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Originally Posted by W1ldK@t
Im sure you only lost points in punctuation....... You may have a slight issue with run on sentences  |
Yea really thought even though thats really sweet story and congrats on the whole beating your gf thing but you should really try to use more puncutation in your sentences because you seem to lack them because as i read it i only saw like 2 periods so well ya thats just a suggestion from me thanks thanks.