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Old January 25th, 05:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Parody help

I need to make a parody of this poem:


O CAPTAIN! my Captain! our fearful trip is done;
The ship has weather’d every rack, the prize we sought is won;
The port is near, the bells I hear, the people all exulting,
While follow eyes the steady keel, the vessel grim and daring:
But O heart! heart! heart!
O the bleeding drops of red,
Where on the deck my Captain lies,
Fallen cold and dead.



O Captain! my Captain! rise up and hear the bells;
Rise up—for you the flag is flungfor you the bugle trills;
For you bouquets and ribbon’d wreaths for you the shores a crowding;

For you they call, the swaying mass, their eager faces turning;
Here Captain! dear father!
This arm beneath your head;
It is some dream that on the deck,
You’ve fallen cold and dead.



My Captain does not answer, his lips are pale and still;
My father does not feel my arm, he has no pulse nor will;
The ship is anchor’d safe and sound, its voyage closed and done;
From fearful trip, the victor ship, comes in with object won;
Exult, O shores, and ring, O bells!
But I, with mournful tread,
Walk the deck my Captain lies,
Fallen cold and dead.
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Old January 25th, 05:49 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I want to make the parody's title

O chopsticks!My Chopsticks!

or

O money!My money!
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Old January 25th, 06:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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o chopsticks, o chopsticks i use you till im done.
My stomach has taken every bite the food i ate was good.
The toilet is near the farts i hear all the people puking.

thats all i got for now. it sucks but i just made it off the top of my head
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Old January 25th, 06:02 PM   #4 (permalink)
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LOL man thats great ! keep them coming
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Old January 25th, 06:06 PM   #5 (permalink)
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make up something for the second verse
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