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August 31st, 11:52 PM
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A Snowman Hitman.
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Paintball Flyer For School.
Me and my friends are trying to get more people frm my school paintballing and so far we've gotten about 3 new people. We asked our principal and she said if we make a flyer, she would let us put it in the case with all the school bulletins.
Here's the final, first draft of the paper... It's a much higher resolution so you can actually see the map and stuff, but you get the idea.
What I'm here for is:
Should I put more info on it?
How could I re-write it to make it better?
Thanks!
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Last edited by Pyropenguin : September 1st at 12:12 AM.
Reason: fix the spelling
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August 31st, 11:57 PM
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Color. Just make it stand out.
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September 1st, 12:02 AM
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A Snowman Hitman.
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Eh, we'll be copying them with black and white copiers, so it has to stay B&W.
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September 1st, 12:03 AM
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good drawings, i like them
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September 1st, 12:05 AM
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A Snowman Hitman.
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I didnt draw them, I got them off of www.warpig.com.
Should I add credit to them on it?
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September 1st, 12:10 AM
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They look very good.
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September 1st, 12:16 AM
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shine on.
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Well, if it has to be black and white, then make the heading stand out more. The way to get more readers is to make it interesting.
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September 1st, 12:28 AM
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Any ideas how to do that? Bolder font, or what?
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September 1st, 12:31 AM
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I'd say use a different font for the headings and titles and yeah, make them bold or layered.
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September 1st, 01:05 AM
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You should also credit the artist. As stated I would look at a different font
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September 1st, 01:17 AM
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BOLD IMPACT STYLE FONT
you got to make it stand out..maybe cool designs between the pictures..just spice it up,give it a border
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September 1st, 09:43 AM
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Yea boarders always make posters and thing like that better. I have no idea how or why, it just does
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September 1st, 09:58 AM
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omg. that looks awsome. most superb.
now that i think of it I have seen the pic with the two ballers watching eachothers backs.
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September 1st, 11:34 AM
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Try printing it on a different color paper like orange or yellow. That with a bolder heading will make it stand out from the other flyers.
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September 2nd, 03:47 PM
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Those drwaings are by Ron Stern, if I am not mistaken...
It's a good start, and will deffinetly get the job done as is. 
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September 2nd, 04:03 PM
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A Snowman Hitman.
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This is the poster that's up right now. It's in there with a big green sheet of paper around it... so it stands out.
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September 2nd, 04:23 PM
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that Anths paintballers looks funny when its smaller....
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September 2nd, 05:23 PM
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i pee sitting down :)
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dude thats a hardcore drawing, who ever drew it is crazy!!!!
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September 2nd, 10:40 PM
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nice poster try puting it on color papers
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September 3rd, 08:39 AM
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ya preferably like a yellow
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