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Old August 31st, 11:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Paintball Flyer For School.

Me and my friends are trying to get more people frm my school paintballing and so far we've gotten about 3 new people. We asked our principal and she said if we make a flyer, she would let us put it in the case with all the school bulletins.

Here's the final, first draft of the paper... It's a much higher resolution so you can actually see the map and stuff, but you get the idea.

What I'm here for is:
Should I put more info on it?
How could I re-write it to make it better?



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Old August 31st, 11:57 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Color. Just make it stand out.
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Old September 1st, 12:02 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Eh, we'll be copying them with black and white copiers, so it has to stay B&W.
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Old September 1st, 12:03 AM   #4 (permalink)
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good drawings, i like them
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Old September 1st, 12:05 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I didnt draw them, I got them off of www.warpig.com.

Should I add credit to them on it?
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Old September 1st, 12:10 AM   #6 (permalink)
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They look very good.
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Old September 1st, 12:16 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Well, if it has to be black and white, then make the heading stand out more. The way to get more readers is to make it interesting.
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Old September 1st, 12:28 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Any ideas how to do that? Bolder font, or what?
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Old September 1st, 12:31 AM   #9 (permalink)
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I'd say use a different font for the headings and titles and yeah, make them bold or layered.
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Old September 1st, 01:05 AM   #10 (permalink)
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You should also credit the artist. As stated I would look at a different font
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BOLD IMPACT STYLE FONT
you got to make it stand out..maybe cool designs between the pictures..just spice it up,give it a border
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Old September 1st, 09:43 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Yea boarders always make posters and thing like that better. I have no idea how or why, it just does
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omg. that looks awsome. most superb.

now that i think of it I have seen the pic with the two ballers watching eachothers backs.
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Try printing it on a different color paper like orange or yellow. That with a bolder heading will make it stand out from the other flyers.
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Those drwaings are by Ron Stern, if I am not mistaken...

It's a good start, and will deffinetly get the job done as is.
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Old September 2nd, 04:03 PM   #16 (permalink)
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This is the poster that's up right now. It's in there with a big green sheet of paper around it... so it stands out.
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that Anths paintballers looks funny when its smaller....
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dude thats a hardcore drawing, who ever drew it is crazy!!!!
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Old September 2nd, 10:40 PM   #19 (permalink)
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nice poster try puting it on color papers
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ya preferably like a yellow
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