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Awful, scrap the idea
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Needs a LOT of improvement
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Meh, s'allright
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Not too bad
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Nice
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December 12th, 07:18 PM
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Bumper Sticker Draft
I'm thinking about designing a bumper sticker for pballers. I threw a very, VERY rough draft together to see what people think. I plan on making it shorter (I know it's too high right now), probably change the text, and prolly change the color scheme. So, please rate, suggestions are very welcome!
Here it is:
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December 12th, 07:19 PM
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Nice man. I like the left part, good work
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December 12th, 07:20 PM
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pretty cool go for it
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December 12th, 07:20 PM
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thats pretty good go for it im thinking about making barrel bags
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December 12th, 07:21 PM
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Looks like **** IMO.. I mean no offense, but its horrible. Glad its just a rough
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December 12th, 07:23 PM
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^^haha ur nice
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December 12th, 07:24 PM
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First work with your graphics skills before attempting to create a sticker.
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December 12th, 07:25 PM
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Originally Posted by Alpha
Looks like **** IMO.. I mean no offense, but its horrible. Glad its just a rough
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So... what exactly makes it ****? I'd like suggestions along w/ criticisms please.
Anyways:
I'm thinking of putting an outline of a paintbrush in the background to kinda accentuate the joke.
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December 12th, 07:27 PM
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Terrible. Period. Sorry.
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December 12th, 07:30 PM
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Guys, seriously, you can call it the worst crap in the world, that's fine... so long as you tell me what can be done to make it any better.
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December 12th, 07:31 PM
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Jewstin
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1.) The font is useless for this design.
2.) The little "paint splatter" on the left side makes it look like he is a dragon with a paintball mask and gun shooting fire.
3.)The cutout of the player is rough and sketchy. Learn to use the pen tool.
The only thing I can see right is the colors. They're catchy. I'll give you a example, hold up.
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December 12th, 07:32 PM
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Actually for a bumper sticker it ain't that bad. I mean who wants a lot of detail in a bumper sticker? Highly detailed bumper stickers make people stare and rear end you. LOL
It's pretty high contrast, nice bright colors... I'd suggest more of a splat pattern instead of the flame effect for the paint.
Perhaps put the brush on the left and have paintballs splattering against it.
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December 12th, 07:33 PM
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The player is just a blob. The way you filled in the gun and player all one color is horrible.. Use filters. Dripping blood text, especially large red dripping blood text in the middle of a picture is horrible. The paintball shot is better then some I've seen, but still crap IMO. The placement of everythign is bad. The text isnt aligned with anythign (use the guides, they work nicely). The background color is too blue.
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December 12th, 07:34 PM
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Originally Posted by PaintballRemix
1.) The font is useless for this design.
2.) The little "paint splatter" on the left side makes it look like he is a dragon with a paintball mask and gun shooting fire.
3.)The cutout of the player is rough and sketchy. Learn to use the pen tool.
The only thing I can see right is the colors. They're catchy. I'll give you a example, hold up.
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Excellent reply, you rock remix.
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December 12th, 07:36 PM
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Download the Plasma Drip font and try using that I think its awsome IMO.
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December 12th, 09:33 PM
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i dont like it, it doesnt look smooth or clean
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December 12th, 09:37 PM
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Originally Posted by paintballer1134
Download the Plasma Drip font and try using that I think its awsome IMO.
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Could you post or PM me the link to DL it please?
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December 12th, 09:38 PM
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with alittle work it could be sweet
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December 12th, 10:00 PM
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The color's are quite catchy. The player, well you did it to fast. Its kinda hard to see the player. It looks like a big gray blob lol. So just make the player more realistic. And the paint looks good, but the shadow needs to go. Makes it look more like fire than paint.
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