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**Fastecho419** · June 19th, 01:16 PM

Ok everybody. I've been thinking for the past few days about this one. I know that not too many of you know me out there but if you guys tune into the lounge and the player stories section you at least know my name.

So this is my idea:

I was thinking about making a story. But not your ordinary gun slinging story about some guy whippin' the crap out of other guys and such. I was thinking of a paintball story. Get me? I mean, but instead of using characters that I want to make up, how about people from the paintballforum right?

So I'm like, I don't wanna put myself as the main character cause' I know I'm gonna glorify myself. But how about somebody that I know is good from the forum?

I'm actually selling my stories that I make to people. I got it as a suggestion from a friend to do it. My buisness hasn't been amazing but it's good enough. For my short stories I charge fifty cents. For the larger stories a dollar and sometimes two or three dollars. Yeah, it's not what you expected, but so what?

So now I've got people telling me they want a paintball story. So as you all can see I wanna put some people from the forum onto it. I don't want your real names, I'll just put in the names that we have from our screenames here. If you want to be in the story I'll gladly make room for you. Please pm me if you want to be in the story...
I'll explain the story in a reply later. I know you guys can't read too much in one sitting.

**Roadkill** · June 19th, 01:48 PM

My name is Nick, I can be the tippy totin badguy if you want....

**Fastecho419** · June 19th, 02:18 PM

Ok Nick, you'll be a Tippman Owner. I did have a part for somebody having a Tippman 98 with a flatline barrel, stock and scope. So that's you. Nick(aka Roadkill).
Here's a little preview of the story from one of the action parts:

Duo rushed over to the right near the X in the middle. His eyes scanned everything that was in his sights. Where did he go? Duo thought to himself recalling his target he had seen seconds before.

Meanwhile on the other side of the field on the other team was Roadkill. His teammate, fastecho was running up towards the X.
"Hold up!" He called out.
But Fast didn't hear him, he continued moving until he was right up next toe the X.

Duo turned and saw Fastecho looking around wildly with his Spyder in his arms. He took one shot and hit Fastecho right squarely in the face.
Then Roadkill saw Duo and cracked shots off. He nearly got Duo but he pulled back too quickly.

Meanwhile other members of Roadkill's team were moving in. Lord Headley(For short Headley) rushed up near the X. He was within fifteen to twenty feet of it.
The flag was right there and he couldn't come any closer.
"Roadkill, you cover me and I'll get the flag! Don't stop till you see the paint splat!"
Roadkill nodded at this and then began firing shots from his Tippman 98 custom. Duo turned and saw headley coming. He then felt a push, then paint cover his mask. He had been hit!

To be Continued...

Do you like?

**Roadkill** · June 19th, 02:25 PM

Yea, i like, but duo would probably be able to mop the floor with me, but thats why i have headley as a team mate lol.

**Fastecho419** · June 19th, 03:03 PM

I was aiming towards that.

**Ryan_Page** · June 19th, 08:05 PM

i am ryan, as shown in the screen name and the sig, i can be the short skinny guy with the e-force gti! wow, i'm a poet and i didn't know it.

**Fastecho419** · June 19th, 08:07 PM

Rrrriiiigggghhhttttt......

OK Ryan, I'll see if I can put you into the story.

**Ryan_Page** · June 19th, 08:15 PM

thanks man

**Fastecho419** · June 19th, 08:16 PM

No problem. But one question, what is an "E-Force GTI?"
I don't know that marker from anywhere. A picture would be nice and some backround information about it so I'll know what to write. Ya know?
Thanks.

**backyard paintb** · June 19th, 09:20 PM

i want to be the evil vilan muhahahahahahahahahaha (mi nombre es pedro)

**Roadkill** · June 20th, 08:29 AM

I dont use my crank anymore, so dont have me using it because i suck with it.

**Roobvandam** · June 20th, 09:17 AM

hey i'm collin, gots a 03 cocker i'd be cool if i could be in the story...i play front, but i'm semi-tall.

**Cerebeus** · June 20th, 10:37 AM

Jordan - Ebladed cocker... Front/mid

**dustyboy316** · June 20th, 11:18 AM

an eforce gti is a piranha gun. I can't say the url to the site, just search piranha in google.

**Zedaine** · June 20th, 11:23 AM

w00t a story!

Jared RT Mag - mid/front player

**Ryan_Page** · June 20th, 11:26 AM

it is a Piranha E-Force GTI, electronic trigger frame, go to B/-\D|/-\NDSP/-\I/\/TB/-\||.com and look under guns/piranha, there is a pic there.

**inkjt510** · June 20th, 06:29 PM

I call the 1337 back player with the agg gat muppet mowing trix! Jk, but woohoo, I'm the first back!

**Fastecho419** · June 21st, 03:08 PM

Ok, story is being started up. I'm having the main character to be Roakill.

**Fastecho419** · June 21st, 05:45 PM

Zedaine, your the guy who is the leader of Penn state's pball team right? Just getting my facts straight for the story...

Also, the story is underway. Done two pages right now, I had to revise a ton of it. The story got kind of sketchy after the fourth page. So now I'm back to two.

**Roadkill** · June 22nd, 01:52 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Fastecho419
Ok, story is being started up. I'm having the main character to be Roakill.

WOOHOO!! I feel so special, maybe i can be in the movie!!!