EnergizerBunny

umm, i think this would be the right place to put this. Ok, im writing a research paper and it has to be five pages yet i can only get this far. All the sites have the same information...anyone know some more resources for this paper or more information on the history of paintball? This is what i have so far.

Bigpimpin1241

when you listed the newer markers you said shocker twice

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Huey69

don't go back and forth between "marker" and "gun"

Describe how specifically the sport changed, i.e how they used to play compared to now. etc.

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EnergizerBunny

anyone know any sources though?

NYY

if i were you id switch my research topic quickly because paintball is imo too new to be researched right now

1337

I wrote a 15 page essay about paintball last year.

You just got to know your stuff. Explain the rules and safety, explain how markers work, etc.

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EnergizerBunny

i wish dude, i was goin to but my dam teacher said no pick one subject....so i chose the history of paintball. here is the updated one, i just added in some crap but she wont know if im right or not.

1337

I hope you space that out, I'm not reading it how it is.

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EnergizerBunny

what do you mean? I will edit it.

imprez55

my suggestion is (i don't no how many pages that is) would be to expand it out a little, almost to the brink of rambling at parts and give examples for everything. like when you list where tournys are give some examples. also when you say electro pnumatic explain what and how that works. and since you stated one leauge you should list more and their differances and similarities (eg. xball has a big x in the middle while psp feilds dont) also sorry if i suggested anything you put in when you updated your paper (i dint read the last post)

tmaxx_2.5

you feelin a tl;dr too?

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EnergizerBunny

Thanks imprez and 1337. I still havent gotten to the recent paintball so that will take up alot of space also.

Edit: What did you move this to recball talk? It has ntohing to do with recreational play and nobody will see it here cuz this is a very slow place?

NYY

watch your commas

and you should have more structure to your paragraphs. The beginning of a paragraph should be very general, then transition into 2-3 facts, then go back to being general at the end with a concluding statement closing that paragraph

needmormoney

that's a good reaserch paper you should give a little more detail on who the people r