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Old March 7th, 2003, 08:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
 
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Ok I have a soft side to me, please dont think Im a sissy, just when I write poems it sort of calms me, this is a blackhawk down poem I wrote.


As blackhawks fly, over their heads
as this mission would end, 18 would be dead
delta moves in capturing their target
a blackhawks down, hit by a rocket
a cry comes from the men on the ground
"delta one, we have a blackhawk down!!!"
a blackhawks is seen, smoke coming from its end
this blackhawk down, the men must defend
another blackhawk flying by
gets hit too, one pilot dies
the other is stuck inside the cockpit
but the courage of two snipers help out a "bit"
they gave their lives
to leave no man behind
it is now night with the ranger's stuck
by a recoiless rifle, mounted on a truck
but the delta's attack swift and silent
to kill the enemy, the mogadishan tirent
gunships fly all around
machine gun fire popping on the ground
the morning comes swift and fast
the soldiers are moving out at last
though no room left for the men
they must run to the end
where their friends await
these men challenged their own fait.


It just makes me calm if Im having a bad day, so what do you guys do to calm yourself after a bad day??
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Old March 7th, 2003, 08:53 PM   #2 (permalink)
 
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like my nutz
u dirty putz
while i eat some UTZ
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Haha, that was good
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Old March 7th, 2003, 08:58 PM   #4 (permalink)
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That night work, but what's a UTZ?
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Old March 7th, 2003, 09:12 PM   #6 (permalink)
 
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when this girl gets online ill post some of heres, all i know is she makes raps/poems for fun and most of them sound pretty neado
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Old March 7th, 2003, 09:40 PM   #7 (permalink)
 
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here is one i wrote.

Life is full of mishaps
Much dismay
What will come next
A bullet
Or last breath

and another

The pain doesn't stop
Could it stop
With the sound
Of thunder
Life is gone
Ended by hate
Ended by shame

If your illiterate then thunder is the sound of a gun.
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Old March 7th, 2003, 09:47 PM   #8 (permalink)
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We just went through a section on poetry in my english class. I wrote this one sonnet that my teacher thought was really great, and everybody else in my class was like freakin out because it was so hard to write a sonnet, but i finished mine in like 10 minutes. To be a sonnet it had to have I think it was 10 syllables in each line and rhyme in a certain scheme, but most of my class didnt do it.
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Old March 7th, 2003, 10:30 PM   #9 (permalink)
 
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i want to die on the battle feild no other death is me
i have no feeling all i see is death and lies
i found a purpose but what is it i dont know
im in but what am i in i have no clue
i have one thing to live for and that thing is the truth
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Old March 7th, 2003, 10:36 PM   #10 (permalink)
 
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I have no chice but to fight that is my purpose that is my plight
I have a destiny that i dont under stand
i need to understand but how
my questions are many my answers few
i always question everything but i get no answers in return
my life is **** my life is hopeless my sorrow in nothing compaird to my purpose
no one knows me know one can see i am me and thats all i need

the funny thing is i just came up wiht these
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Old March 7th, 2003, 10:43 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Ruba-dub-dub lets get to the grub.

There's my contribution.
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Old March 7th, 2003, 11:07 PM   #12 (permalink)
 
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Anger pain its all me its all there
its what i have to deal with
and its all for what
fame no
fortune no
its for whats right
its for my belifes
its for god
its not for me for if i had a choice
i wouldnt be here i wouldnt be born

I cant love
i cant feel
for if i do
i will fail
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Old March 8th, 2003, 03:44 PM   #13 (permalink)
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I have a hard time putting war, religion, AND truth all in the same box. They can all be related independantly, but not all at once.

no matter what you believe, most (maybe all) religions are lies.
Wars are built on lies. (The Gulf of Tonkin, anyone? Iraq's phantom chemical weapons? The UN's post-WWII promise to the Zionists? Marxist Communism? All lies with great destructive potential.)
Wars can also be built on religion.

Wars never happen because of the truth.
in all fairness, only one religion or no religion can be correct. Those can't all be true.

Poetry? I've always been fond of Bob Cat's monologue in Police Academy 4:

Gene, Gene, made a machine.
Joe, Joe, made it go.
Art, Art, lit a fart
and blew the whole damn thing appart.
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Religion isn't the problem, it's man.
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no it's religion, think about it almost all of the wars except for a few recent ones have been about religion. thats why i choose to be atheist because in reality your "god" is just causeing war.
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No, it is the people causing the wars.
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Religion dosn't cause war, it's the people, even if everyone was Athiest there would still be an assload of war.
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what wars were caused by religion?
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Every war. Look at the whole story and almost every war has some dispute over religion. But people are the one's who do it. Religion is just an issue that not everyone agrees on. Like someone said, even without religion we would have wars.
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Religion dosn't cause war, it's the people, even if everyone was Athiest there would still be an assload of war.
well since we can't get rid of man then why not get rid of religion? btw ure sig is waaaaaayyyyyyyyyy to long. and no ther wouldn't still be an assload of war. there would still be war but if religion was taken out of the picture i say about 75% of the wars wouldn't happen that have happened.
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the problem is that no religion can be proven correct, and several can be proven flat-out wrong. Therefor, the only way to 'prove' your religion is to blow up the people who dissagree. Look at the jewish zionists in Palestine, look at the enraged fundamentalist Islamics, look at our president, who declares God's will every time he adresses terrorism. Since when was God America's piss boy? What about France? They're religious. What about Germany? They're religious. But.. wait- they dissagree with Bush's warmongering tactics. That can't be right. These are nations of God, aren't they? Oh, that's right. Religion is a pacifying tool used to quell Americans into thinking that all is well, because the holy oil war is all in God's plan.

Tell you what, Jesus Christ doesn't sanction killing your enemy in ANY situation. That's what makes Old Testament beliefs so dangerous. They're vile and vengefull. Tell you what, though, those Zionists that you claim to hate so much for blowing people up (that is, your tragic attempt at showing 'empathy') follow the same Old Testament god you do. Guess their wars are infallible too. The Islams? Same god, new prophet. Well then, I guess we're ALL vindicated in the eyes of the lord.

THEN WHY ARE WE BLOWING EACHOTHER UP?

Religions don't cause war as much as they catalyze war. Even wars that had nothing to do with religion started with the strife caused by religion. World War I was sparked by the passive hatred in the Balkans, based on religious strife. This in turn set WWII in motion, in which several enterprising Fascists would again use God to justify their actions- and blame all political issues on the Jews (THE lynch-pin of his plan, without which he would not have gotten far.) WWII caused the UN to promise Zionists land in Israel. See a pattern? Religion causes strife, strife causes war, war causes religious (and racial) discrimination, which in turn causes more strife, which makes more war.

Viet Nam is the only exception I can think of, but that was perpetuated by Communism, an extinct ideology introduced by the prophet Marx, promising people things they will never have. There you have it. It's a religion minus supernatural powers.

Capitalism has the same potential when forced onto populations. Don't bother spreading capitalism. It's irrelevant to any non-capitalist country. The word you want here is Democracy.
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