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Old October 27th, 2004, 08:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
 
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I have to write a scary story and...

I need some good ides. It has to be like 5 pages double spaced. You guys got any good story ideas for AP english?
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Old October 27th, 2004, 08:29 PM   #2 (permalink)
 
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are you allowd to use the general theme of an older book?
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Old October 27th, 2004, 08:30 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Here's one, its called my job. I work in a church at night after the secretary and office manager have left. At around 8 or 9 o'clock, I have to walk through a gigantic empty church with no lights on and tidy up/lock up. If there are any homeless people I have to kick them out, if there are any devil worshippers vandalizing the church, I have to kick them out. It's more than a little creepy when I am pretty sure there is someone hiding, and especially when the wind is blowing because it literally shakes the frame of the church and the whole place creaks and I have almost **** my pants on more than one occasion.
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It's an Ap english teacher so she probably knows all the cheating writting tips....my idea is that these kids are playing baseball and a ball gets hit into a corn field and they find an old house that was pillaged in the civil war that is haunted. they steal some stuff and they get haunted...return the stuff house rests in peace etc
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Old October 27th, 2004, 08:34 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I like my idea better , any story starring me can't be bad.
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i beg to differ fists. and i like that story phantom. but it sounds more like a thriller not a scary story
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Old October 27th, 2004, 08:41 PM   #8 (permalink)
 
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i beg to differ fists. and i like that story phantom. but it sounds more like a thriller not a scary story
It has to be a creative/mystery scary story. I'l going to use that/
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Old October 27th, 2004, 08:47 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I'l going to use that/
Wait...AP stands for Advanced Placement right?
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Old October 27th, 2004, 09:32 PM   #10 (permalink)
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i beg to differ fists. and i like that story phantom. but it sounds more like a thriller not a scary story
Get on your knees and beg... What could be bad about a story starring me?
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Old October 27th, 2004, 09:48 PM   #11 (permalink)
 
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Actually Fist's idea isn't bad... maybe the church people commit an act of blasphemy, and the place is demonized. It could be pretty creepy.
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Actually Fist's idea isn't bad... maybe the church people commit an act of blasphemy, and the place is demonized. It could be pretty creepy.
But then agains, Church + School = Not a good idea.
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Old October 27th, 2004, 09:50 PM   #13 (permalink)
 
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Cave story.
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lol i was gonna say that too proph3t
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Old October 27th, 2004, 10:05 PM   #15 (permalink)
 
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do one about a kid who goes in a cave, sees a hole, makes it bigger, goes in, a rock moves . . he disappears


**EDIT** sorry proph3t, didnt see your post
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i had the same exasct thing shame it isnt on my comp since i reformatted i got an A on it 2
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Old October 27th, 2004, 11:02 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Just try to create as many disturbing images you can in your writing - that is key to making a good horror story. Also never make the reader feel comfortable in your writing, they need to be in the dark and on the edge.
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Old October 28th, 2004, 05:54 AM   #18 (permalink)
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Wait...AP stands for Advanced Placement right?
I thnk it means appleas and peanuts. Could be wrong though.
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