[Doog201]

I am doing a demonstration speech on how to have a safe and ejoyable paintball game. I need a good clincher that can go into a school paper. All the ones I like wont work.

 

[martix_agent]

it's your paper so we can't know what it's about. what's your topic? what are your main points? maybe you can give us a copy of the paper so we can better help you?

dont' expect much help for this though, it is your paper, after all.

 

[Doog201]

Dude its about like safty stuff, rules and what you need to play. Its stupid but i couldnt thnk of anythn else. Just somthn catchy to end with?

 

[martix_agent]

You don't have enough if you can't give me the 3 main points of it. Start writing the paper and maybe it'll come to you as you go. That's what i've always done.

 

[Doog201]

I did its done except the clincher. Its due tomrow. any suggestions at all?

 

[the_real_kaz]

Why don't you just over complicate things matrix?

All he's looking for is a catchy ending. Kinda like "And that's the way the cookie crumbles" but having to do with paintball.

How does "Now remeber, paintball is about having fun and always about being safe." sound? Just something that poped into my head.

 

[Doog201]

Ya i gues tht works for a school thing.

 

[the_real_kaz]

It's ok, I'm sure with some more time I could come up with more things, but I've got a class to go to. Hope you figure something out.

 

[martix_agent]

I just like doing things the right way. I don't wanna give stuff out if no work has been done. I also dont' wanna throw stuff out there that's completely irrelevant.

 

[skapunkin]

Matrix is trying to just get a feeling for your piece so we can come up with a nice end-line.

I am having a hard time coming up with something, and I am a very decent wordsmith, simply because I don't know what the tone of your piece is like.

Try these:

· Because of the stigma that accompanies it, Paintball has developed a serious attitude about safety. Be a part of something great and uphold that tradition.

· When it comes to Paintball, as with any sport, safety is your number one priority. Follow these guidelines and you're guaranteed to have loads of fun.

· You'll shoot your eye out, kid!

 

[kenny_1491]

Paintball isn't about shooting each other, it is about learning teamwork and having a great and safe day with your friends.

 

[Doog201]

Thanks man. good stuff. Ill use the When it comes to pb thng and the Christmas Story line. Nice Calvin and Hobbes icon.

 

[skapunkin]

Paintball isn't just about shooting each other, it is about learning teamwork and having a great and safe day with your friends.

Fixed. thumup:

 

[kenny_1491]

Fixed. thumup:

lulz, very true.