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Im writing a story for english class about some guys who get stuck in video games. Lets begin...

My idea is that one of them gets a newfangled game console prototype and procede to try it out with his 3 friends, playing a bunch of classic games adapted for it(mario,FF,Halo,etc). The console isn't perfect yet and so when a thunderstorm starts up and hits a telephone pole and two of the guys get sucked into the game. The other two have to try and get them out while they have to survive in the games (kill bowser, team up with masterchief,etc).Every time the electricity glitches the guys switch the game they are in.

So, how does it sound? I would appreciate ideas and constructive criticism.
 

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Shine on Rick Wright
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you should make it an erotic game
 

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Sounds like Captian N: The Game Master, to me... but that show owned so hard when I was a lad. Just have one guy waffle stomp the toad in mario that says "Thank you, but our princess is in a nother castle" I hated those guys.
 
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